Tag: Writing

Online Meeting (16.03.2022)

Hello blog viewers/welcome to my blog! Today I attended to the online meeting.

We learnt on of our times tables that we need a bit of work on. I chose my 8x times tables. We then went through our literacy task (which was about poetry). I enjoyed the online meeting and had fun.

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Narrative Writing – Magical Cave

Hello blog viewers/welcome to my blog! This is my writing task for this week. A couple of weeks ago we learnt about explanation writing and now we are doing narrative writing. We wrote about a certain picture, used the narrative structure and used some keywords. I hope you have enjoyed this post. Please leave a positive comment on my blog.

Writing Challenge – Dark Hallway

Hello blog viewers/welcome to my blog! Today in home learning we did a writing challenge. We had to write about a picture. We could only write 6 sentences and use keywords that consists of never, because, eerie, Suddenly,. Here is my writing piece. I hope you have enjoyed this post. Please leave a positive comment on my blog.

As the high school student entered through the gate, an eerie noise echoed through the hallway. Never has he been this alone before. Silence occurred in the dark misty area. The silence was interrupted when the gate shut down behind him. Because of this he was frightened and fell on his knees. He slowly raised his head and saw a strange figure in the distance.

Home Learning WK4/T1 2022 – Literacy 3

Hello blog viewers/welcome to my blog! This is one of my literacy task for this week. We had to read two articles from Kiwi Kids News and write a four sentence summary about each article we read. I read and wrote about BMW ix and Kiwis need to leave Ukraine. I hope you have enjoyed this post. Please leave a positive comment on my blog.

  1. Car manufacturer BMW has created world-first technology that changes the colour of a car with the press of a button. The new car was displayed for the first time at the Consumer Electronics Show in Las Vegas earlier this month. The technology works by bringing different pigments to the outside when energised by electrical signals. These signals are controlled by a button in the vehicle or on a phone app. The car changes shades, designs, and colours giving different patterns in black, white, and grey combinations.
  2. The government is calling to New Zealanders in Ukraine to leave immediately, heightened military tension in the area, foreign Minister Nanaia Mahuta made the announcement last week. The New Zealand Government is advising New Zealanders in Ukraine to leave immediately while there are flights able to get them home,” Mahuta said in a statement. New Zealand’s government’s ability to help people in Ukraine is very limited. New Zealand’s advice has also been followed by Australia, the United States, and the United Kingdom.

Reasons Why GI is the best community in NZ – Introduction

Hello blog viewers/welcome to my blog! Today we continued with our explanation writing planning. We created an introduction that talks about GI, the best community. I hope you have enjoyed this post. Please leave a positive comment on my blog.

Introduction:

Glen Innes is the best community in New Zealand. Glen Innes, a unique community. Glen Innes is located East of Auckland, with a population of 8,873. Home to beautiful artworks spray painted on walls. Glen Innes is a friendly area where most school children hang around, offers a variety of learning opportunities and multiple schools scattered in the area. Glen Innes’s dairies and shops are everywhere and include many items.

Reasons Why GI is the best community in NZ

Hello blog viewers/welcome to my blog! Today in literacy we have been learning about Explain Writing. We learnt about how to plan our explanation writing. I hope you have enjoyed this post. Please leave a positive comment on my blog.

Glen Innes Is The Best Community In NZ

Brainstorm:

A lot of dairies/shops

  • Includes many items
  • Friendly Shopkeepers
  • Assist you at times of need

Cool Artwork 

  • Spray Painted artwork on walls
  • Represent something cool/important
  • Art Gallery/Street

A lots of schools which means a lot of kids

  • Lots of kids, like I mentioned
  • More Schools,more learning opportunities
  • Free Lunches

Kiwi Kids News – Minnie Mouse gets a Makeover

Hello blog viewers/welcome to my blog! This is a summary about Minnie Mouse gets a makeover. This is an article for kiwi kids news. I hope you have enjoyed this post. Please leave a positive comment on my blog.

 

Minnie Mouse has gotten a makeover. Her character and outfit was created almost 100 years ago. But to celebrate Disneyland Paris’s 30th Anniversary, she’s now switching to her red dress for a blue blazer and matching trousers. The new looks was designed by Stella McCartney in honour of Women’s History Month. She said “I wanted Minnie to wear her very first pantsuit at Disneyland Paris,” and also said “so I have designed one of my iconic costumes – a blue tuxedo-“.

Writing Challenge – Mr Goodwin does a tiktok in Samoa

Hello blog viewers/welcome to my blog! Today in literacy we did a 6 sentence writing challenge. We had to write about 3 images and include keywords such as exuberant,sour, ”  “,  and a comma (,). I hope you have enjoyed this post. Please leave a positive comment on my blog.

 

Writing Piece: Mr Goodwin saw this Samoan on tiktok and decided to travel to Samoa. When he arrived in Samoa he had to choose a song to dance to, he started scrolling through different songs and albums. He saw this one album called “Sour”. He pressed record and danced his heart out. He was very exuberant when he was dancing, soon he was ready to post the tiktok. He also tagged #tiktokinsamoa.

Arthibition: Mr Goodwin’s photo (https://sites.google.com/a/manaiakalani.org/manaiakalani—google-class-onair/) was found from that site/link.

Explanation Writing – Dream Home!

Hello blog viewers/welcome back to my blog! This is an explanation writing piece I wrote. I wrote about my dream home and the many things (well only 3 main things) I would want in it. I hope you have enjoyed this post. Please leave a positive comment on my blog.

Dream Home!

A dream home would include a huge upstairs, twenty rooms, an indoor gym, an indoor pool, and so much more. Let me share with you my dream home, filled with insane and interesting things.

In my dream home I would have a huge water park! Lots of swimming equipment/floaties, a hot tub that has glowing water, and of course ten insanely big slides. Everyone loves to get wet and soaked with water. What’s better than having your own water park – wait, maybe the next one will change your mind.

You’ve probably been to a movie theatre and know that they are enormous, with big screens and a lot of chairs. Don’t forget the snacks (which are like one hundred dollars)! If you got to own your own movie theatre you would get to watch all the movies you want and have as much snacks you want because you own it! You can invite friends and families, hang and chill watching Enchanto or Spongebob or any movie of your choice. Let’s move onto my last room that I’m sure will fascinate you.

Don’t you just love the taste and smell or delicious and mouth watering slushies or shaved ice. Just imagine owning your own room filled with different flavors of slushies and shaved ice! Slushies and shaved ice are a good refreshing snack. Yes they aren’t healthy for you and you shouldn’t drink it all day, everyday, but everyone loves them!

In conclusion, these are all the many things I would include in my dream home. A water park, movie theater, and of course a room filled with slushies/shaved ice.

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